cut the first and last
It's okay, it'd be a lot better if you just did the middle segment as a joke by itself, and imrpove the art because you only have to see him for a second. A lot of people probably got bored waiting for it, and the first scene doesn't seem worth the wait, so they just said forget it and didn't even watch the rest.
Guy gets Im, guy reads news, guy reacts, then the brother... it's funny on its own and it's a better joke than the other two, plus, it doesn't try to teach a weird obvious moral.
Good second joke though, it made me chuckle.